Injustice [oneshot]
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I have never read something so heartwarming -so heartbreaking in my entire life. And that's saying something. Moon's care for family, personality, everything, drew me in. You managed to create and develop a substantial character who could be connected with and cared about in a short story. I felt the characters emotions, I could visualize what they were seeing. Niet, you astonish me. You have a degree in English it something?
This was completely and utterly beautiful. I was in tears at the end. Keep writing - you have serious talent.
My score 1-10? 777.
nice story Reminds me of PMD my starter is riolu and my partner is vulpix
This is the best story I’ve read! Poor little Absols. What will they do without a mother? Why was that trainer wanting Silent Moon so bad he threw a Luxary ball?
PFP made my Moonstorm123
awesome oneshot
Nooo I must know more! This is so good Niet, you’re a great writer! :D
this is too sad me me to handle.
see my tears.
SEE MY TEARS
image from the official Pokemon Sun and Moon Anime
This really puts it in perspective what really happens in the games, in the pokemon's eyes.
Honestly after reading this story I don't think I'll ever touch an official game again...
Selling some stuff: Check UFT Fields for mons.
Looking for stuff: Nothing at the moment!~
Feed mah big babu~
Azure Flute
Summon Item
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An elaborately carved instrument that seems to be older than time itself. By using it, it is possible to call down the Legendary Pokémon Arceus.
Unsellable
Likes:
Sweet food
MAX
Jolly nature
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