good job niet! 10/10
I have never read something so heartwarming -so heartbreaking in my entire life. And that's saying something. Moon's care for family, personality, everything, drew me in. You managed to create and develop a substantial character who could be connected with and cared about in a short story. I felt the characters emotions, I could visualize what they were seeing. Niet, you astonish me. You have a degree in English it something? This was completely and utterly beautiful. I was in tears at the end. Keep writing - you have serious talent. My score 1-10? 777.
nice story Reminds me of PMD my starter is riolu and my partner is vulpix
This is the best story I’ve read! Poor little Absols. What will they do without a mother? Why was that trainer wanting Silent Moon so bad he threw a Luxary ball?
PFP made my Moonstorm123
this is so amazing i want to feed all the eevees berries
in my life i have never seen a better story. you are so increedibly amazing
Wonderfull! 1000000\10 OwO
Nooo I must know more! This is so good Niet, you’re a great writer! :D
this is too sad me me to handle. see my tears. SEE MY TEARS
image from the official Pokemon Sun and Moon Anime
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