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I have never read something so heartwarming -so heartbreaking in my entire life. And that's saying something. Moon's care for family, personality, everything, drew me in. You managed to create and develop a substantial character who could be connected with and cared about in a short story. I felt the characters emotions, I could visualize what they were seeing. Niet, you astonish me. You have a degree in English it something?
This was completely and utterly beautiful. I was in tears at the end. Keep writing - you have serious talent.
My score 1-10? 777.