Could you perhaps make a sequel? Where the mother escapes and finds her family again? And maybe she'll find the Dad Absol turned into a ghost Absol like the Mother Marowak from this year's halloween event?
Best story ive heard all year. keep it up ^w^
i hate cliffhangers. BTW, Niet, some if ur other stories give me a forbidden screen.
I am no critic but I truly enjoyed the story
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I haven't been able to find a story nor book that has made me feel this way. I thank you for it. :) I normally release te pokemon I catch in the fishing hut. I do it just for fun to see the water pokemon variations.
Well I offically hate catching pokemon now. *Catches 3rd shiny eevee* What?
I have a spiky potato and potato wifi
I wanna read what happens next D: Ahhh.
I did not need to read this today. Not when I just lost a kitten, and all I can think about now are those poor little babies who might die all alone. :'( But this and all the other pieces I've read are definitely really good. You should consider writing a book. And I wouldn't mind if you let the villains win in the end. I'm a bit of an evil witch myself. ^.^
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It's pretty well written and has a nice storyline to it. I just don't get why a trainer would use a Master Ball just to get a normal Pokemon ._. but yeah, otherwise, great story c:
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