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Thanks for all your feedback so far.
Just to clarify, Silent Moon is the mother of the children. I realise it's not made clear during her narration, except right at the end where she refers to her mate as "he" ;) Also, if she were a "he", the pet name would be "Moony", not "Moonie".
Also, there's a reason this is a oneshot. Two, actually. One: I'm an evil person. Two: By leaving loose ends hanging from the main thread of the story, I allow room for the reader's imagination. In other words, it's up to you, dear readers. Play through the story in your minds, and establish what's most likely to happen. However, keep in mind a number of facts:
Also, I don't know if anyone spotted the huge irony in the story.
I may write a follow-up to this story, but don't count on it :p
Author spooilers, don't click if you want to keep your interpretation!
- Silent Moon was caught in a Master Ball by an ignorant Trainer. She cannot escape, and he is extremely unlikely to release her.
- Absol tend to be very isolated and independent. You saw the attitude she had with Ren, it's unlikely she has any other "friends" (read: acquaintances)
- When I write stories, Deus ex Machina
"God from the Machine" - an event that makes things "just work", usually when the author has written himself into a corner
does NOT happen. There are no miracles. If the characters want a miracle, they must MAKE it happen. If anyone is to be the beneficiary of Deus ex Machina, it's the bad guys ;) Like I said, I'm an evil person.
- In the flashback, we get to learn that the mountain is prone to sudden and harsh snowstorms. Even if the children manage to fend for themselves, they would probably not survive the winter.Author spoilers, don't click if you want to keep your interpretation!
Silent Moon hunted an Ampharos to feed her family. Remember that the Ampharos was foraging for berries, and had quite a number before being attacked. The most likely reason for gathering so many is so the Ampharos could feed her own family. Even though Silent Moon performed the rite that makes her kill morally acceptable in the Pokémon world, the fact remains that there is a herd of Mareep out there somewhere waiting for berries that aren't coming.
Clip from Pokémon anime, re-lined by me
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