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I can say that this story captivated my interest! I liked how it had a dark edge to it, plus the ending was nice.
However, I would have liked to see more description on what the humans looked like. I know people don't usually go into a lot of description on side characters in a one shot, but I think something small like describing height or hair color would help your readers envision the story better.