The Rise of Magma by 
AstrayedHannah
Chapter 1: A New Life pg. 2
Page Description
Woo! Finished the second page! I think I will aim to do weekly uploads with this ;u; Maybe. It will depend if I can get faster with linearting and stuff! Maybe it will one day be a whole chapter a week (which is what I should aim for anyways)
Anyways! Lizzu received her Magma Pokemon! Just what could they be?! (hurhur)
Who are those two mysterious figures talking? Find out during the next couple of pages ;D
I like this style a little more I think, coloring wise, so I will try to work on it the best I can and make it even better! (and do cleaner coloring ;u; )
That is all! Please feel free to leave questions you want to ask, or even comments! I will always try my best to respond!
Enjoy!
We still need background characters that we can add in! You can have a character featured as a Magma/Aqua grunt or a background trainer! Just PM me a description or post one here on the comic ;u; I just need some background characters so I can add more details and such~
Thank you!
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Well, I've got a few people you can use, if you like. One female has dark brown, curly hair with brown eyes. A male has short brown hair and green eyes, and another male has black hair and green eyes. Is this descriptive enough for you?
— Aysu Llyr @ 01/Apr/2015 12:33@Anniss Haha! You are right xD I was more so rushing the coloring than anything. I like how Lizzu's hair turned out in this one though! So I may try to keep with that form of coloring! ;u;
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AstrayedHannah @ 01/Mar/2015 19:33in reply to Anniss's comment
Don't rush it! Quality over quantity! ^w^
— Anniss @ 01/Mar/2015 19:31
in reply to Aysu Llyr's comment