Burn: A Nuzlocke Tale by Avaritia
Ch.1 Pt. 4: New Bark Town
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Page Description
I did things a wee bit differently text-wise this time around. The color should be more legible, though hopefully my handwriting is too :p
Do you guys prefer text or hand-written?
Oh, and a special thanks to MeowNya413 for lending me their Vulpix OC to make a cameo! Let's just hope that Furret puts out that fire. If you want to help liven up the world, hit me up with a PM about what your Pokemon OC looks like and may be doing~
Props to anyone who's read my fanfic before its inactivity deletion (Which I may bring back eventually...) and recognized the two other cameos.
Reader Comments
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It is a little hard to read the dark blue on black, maybe brighten that up a bit, but the other blue text is fine. It kinda looks like 2 different shades now (from the black making it darker) even though it's the same I'm guessing.
— firepiplup @ 07/Oct/2015 19:20You're so welcome!~
Haha I like to burn things >:33
MUAHAHAHAHAHAHA
— Armageddemon @ 06/Oct/2015 18:36@beeside It looked so good on my computer screen, but the text really darkened up looking at it on my phone :c
Blue text: "Just a warning, he can be a little eccentric"
— Avaritia @ 06/Oct/2015 13:54in reply to
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Just a tip I can't read the text that's on black. But great art work!
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